Doesn't sound like the average Koala, maybe your beast is half Koala half something else.. I like that your beast wears a Tuxedo, sounds very sophisticated! What made you think up that bit?
You have used an adjective to describe the colour of your beast, which is good. I would love to know more about what your beast smells, sounds and feels like.. Please add more detail to your post, maybe even draw a picture to help your readers see your vision.
I love the movie Fantastic Beasts, have you seen it? One of my favourite creatures from the film was Newt's Bowtruckle, I just thought its tiny green twig like body, leafy head and little brown eyes were really cute!
I look forward to reading your updated post. Remember to use lots of adjectives.
Mauri Charlee,
ReplyDeleteDoesn't sound like the average Koala, maybe your beast is half Koala half something else.. I like that your beast wears a Tuxedo, sounds very sophisticated! What made you think up that bit?
You have used an adjective to describe the colour of your beast, which is good. I would love to know more about what your beast smells, sounds and feels like.. Please add more detail to your post, maybe even draw a picture to help your readers see your vision.
I love the movie Fantastic Beasts, have you seen it? One of my favourite creatures from the film was Newt's Bowtruckle, I just thought its tiny green twig like body, leafy head and little brown eyes were really cute!
I look forward to reading your updated post. Remember to use lots of adjectives.
Toe feiloa'i fo'i,
Cia.